‘THE PERFECT FIT’
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As a reader, and what’s worse
a publisher, of formal verse,
I write in hopes I’m not too late
to add my voice to this debate
on whether poetry should rhyme.
I say perhaps not all the time,
but often. Form need not detract
from meaning; it can add, in fact.
The trouble is, it’s not so easy.
Lexicographer Gene Lees, he
claims that “There are only four
true rhymes for ‘love”’* (“of”
adds one more.)
It isn’t just the joy of it--
the entering, the perfect fit--
that makes the poets think of
“glove”
when sex is what they’re writing
of.
With all the animals on earth
enjoying procreation’s mirth,
why do the poets look above,
and then, why choose the boring
dove?
The answer, when push comes to
shove,
is insufficient rhymes for “love.”
It’s here, the Twelfth of Never
Time:
the poets have run out of rhyme.
P.S. If you must edit, I’m
agreeable, but keep the rhyme.
The meter too. And having said it,
maybe you’d best just not edit.
* The Modern Rhyming Dictionary, Oxford University Press, 1981.
JOHN DANIEL, SANTA BARBARA
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